"When are you free to chat?" takes about three emails to turn into one meeting: you ask, they offer a window, you counter, they confirm. "Tuesday at 10 or Thursday at 2, 15 minutes, to look at your fire-alarm inspection dates" takes one. A good meeting request states three things in its first four lines: why, how long, and two specific times.

Below are six versions for six situations, all from a fictional fire and safety inspection company, Cardinal Fire and Safety in Louisville, run by Gwen Tillman. Each follows the same frame, with wording that changes depending on how well the person knows you. First, a short list of what every request needs.

What a meeting request has to state

Put these in the first four lines, before any background:

  • Purpose: what the meeting is for, in one sentence, from the other person's side.
  • Length: 15 minutes, 20, 30. Short is easier to say yes to, and you can always run over if they want.
  • Two times: specific days, times and a time zone. "Tuesday 10:00 a.m. Eastern or Thursday 2:00 p.m. Eastern."
  • The way: phone, video link, or in person at their office.

The longer path from first reply to booked call is in how to book meetings with prospects. A scheduling link is fine as a backup, but not as the only option. Plenty of people won't open one from a stranger. There's more on links versus text in booking into Google Calendar without a link.

1. To a prospect who just replied

When someone replies "tell me more," the next message should book the meeting, not send a brochure. If they asked for information, how to respond when a prospect says send me more info covers that case.

Subject: Re: Fire alarm inspections at Parkside Plaza

Hi Raj, thanks for the reply. The quickest way to answer your question is a 15-minute call where I can ask how many alarm panels you have and when they were last tested. Does Tuesday at 10:00 a.m. or Thursday at 2:00 p.m. Eastern work? I'll call you at the number on your email signature.

The reason it works is that you're offering to answer his question, which is the thing he cares about, and you're asking him two small things in return. Keep the original subject line so the reply stays in the thread.

2. To a cold contact

The first email to a stranger should ask for less. Instead of "a meeting," ask for a short, specific conversation.

Subject: Alarm inspection dates at the Brookline Hotel

Hi Marisol, your property's fire alarm certificate looks like it expires in March. I inspect alarm systems for hotels in Louisville and can walk through what the inspector will look for in 15 minutes. Would Tuesday at 10:00 or Wednesday at 3:00 Eastern work? If you aren't the right person, please point me to who handles this.

Gwen Tillman, Cardinal Fire and Safety, 210 Main Street, Louisville, KY. Reply "stop" and I won't email you again.

The footer isn't decoration. Commercial email in the US should have an accurate From line and subject, a physical address and a working way to opt out under the CAN-SPAM Act. Also, the email asks for the right person if Marisol isn't, which often gets a referral back. If the first request gets no reply, the follow-up email subject line examples cover the next one. For more on this first message, see how to get meetings with decision makers.

3. To someone who was referred to you

A referral already has a reason to take the call. Name the person who sent you in the first line, because that's the reason they'll open it.

Subject: Hannah Brooks suggested we talk

Hi Dev, Hannah Brooks at Eastgate Properties said you manage the buildings on Frankfort Avenue and might want a second opinion on inspection timing. Could we do 20 minutes on Wednesday at 9:00 or Friday at 11:00 Eastern? I can come by the office if that's easier.

Only name a referrer who actually said you could. If Hannah introduced you by email, reply to that thread instead. The blurb that makes those introductions easy is in how to ask for an introduction.

4. To a possible partner

A partner meeting is different. You want something from each other, so lead with what the other side gets.

Subject: Referrals between us

Hi Colleen, your clients at the insurance agency often ask who does their alarm inspections, and I often meet owners asking who writes their coverage. I'd like 20 minutes to see whether we should be sending each other work. Thursday at 8:30 or Friday at 1:00 Eastern? I'll bring two client examples.

Notice there's no pitch. The purpose is to decide whether there's a fit, and the "two client examples" show you've thought about it. Partners are busy, so 20 minutes is the ceiling.

5. To a past client

You already know each other, so be warmer and direct about the reason. Check eight check-in emails for existing clients for variations, and borrow the pattern here.

Subject: Your inspection comes due in April

Hi Sam, your annual alarm inspection at the Frankfort Avenue building comes due in April. I'd like 15 minutes to confirm the panel count and set a date before the calendar fills. Would Monday at 11:00 or Wednesday at 4:00 Eastern work? Or just reply with a day that does.

The reason is a date on their calendar, and the offer of "reply with a day" makes it easy for someone who doesn't want to pick between your times.

6. To reschedule

Reschedule requests go wrong when they're vague. Name the original time, own the change, and give two new options.

Subject: Moving our Thursday call

Hi Raj, something came up with an inspection and I need to move our Thursday 2:00 call. I'm sorry for the shuffle. Could we do Friday at 10:00 or Monday at 1:00 Eastern instead? Same 15 minutes, same number.

If the other person moved it, you can say, "No problem at all. Here are two times that work for me." Don't make them feel they've caused a problem. If your meetings often get moved, a confirmation text helps; see how to confirm appointments by text.

After the yes: send the invite, then a one-line agenda

When they pick a time, send a calendar invite within five minutes, with the video link or address and a one-line agenda in the description. A meeting that sits in two inboxes is more likely to happen. If you have a plan for the call itself, a 20-minute sales call agenda fits straight after this email.

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